I am a year 6 student from Hay Park School - Tuffery Class and my name is Farah. You and your buddies have done a great job making this it has lots of information and it would be very helpful for someone who is researching about it. I like how you have put a picture that looks like it was in the old days. Maybe next time before posting check the colour of the texts because it's hard to see and maybe your capital letters? Either way Good job!
My name is Gabriella and I am a year 6 from Hay park school. You and your friends done a very great job with your wahine disaster.
I think that next time when you do your wahine disaster you should make sure your writings is more clear so that we can read it probably maybe you should try and use a different colou.
Maybe next time you should add more information about what you are doing like why you are doing it? and how did you do it?
Hey there Lockie,
ReplyDeleteI am a year 6 student from Hay Park School - Tuffery Class and my name is Farah.
You and your buddies have done a great job making this it has lots of information and it would be very helpful for someone who is researching about it.
I like how you have put a picture that looks like it was in the old days.
Maybe next time before posting check the colour of the texts because it's hard to see and maybe your capital letters? Either way Good job!
Kia ora Lockie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriella and I am a year 6 from Hay park school. You and your friends done a very great job with your wahine disaster.
I think that next time when you do your wahine disaster you should make sure your writings is more clear so that we can read it probably maybe you should try and use a different colou.
Maybe next time you should add more information about what you are doing like why you are doing it? and how did you do it?
Kiaora Lockie
ReplyDeleteMy name is Inshirah and I go to Awahono school.
This is a very neat poster and I love the background.
I think you should work on not making the background colour and writing colour the same.
Regards
Inshirah