persuasive writing

WALT write a persuasive piece to convince someone of my opinion

Have you ever wanted unlimited time on technology. have you wanted all the devices in the world, wail that is what i would like, The internet says that playing video games you can up your social skills

(reason 1)if you play car games and you do a realistic play then when it comes to real life driving you know how to do and it a lot easier, so that means that when i play farming game it helps me with my driving and my farming as well

(reason 2) videos games gave you better vision. a study says that playing video games changes pathways in your brain.

(reason 3)Gaming is Good for You. According to the American Psychological Association, playing video games, including shooter games, can boost learning and health

I hope you learn something from me and we need more time on technology it helps our brain a lot so tell your parents we need more technology time.

parents I hope you heard that

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

Conclusion

• This ties back/recaps back to the introduction

Highlight evidence of linking words.

I like how you brought this to real life skill’s and you are trying to keep gaming platform alive and i think i should have unlimited time on technology       Thank you Luke :}

I know parents are so mean so we should have more tec time